Humanities : Evaluation essay

Evaluation essay about Amazon

I wrote a rough draft, but my tutor said I have to change a lot of thing, so I need a help to make it best essay...

1. I change some points such as thesis and second reason(first I wrote about delivery but she said all online shop do delivery, so I change topic), but I am not sure this is great.

2. Second reason paragraph still need quotes.

3. My professor said my PIE and quote sandwich are still weak.

If you want to delete some parts or change topics, it is fine


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